Maybe:
There are so many words to describe you
But there is just no way to put it
If it rhmyed I'm sorry I didnt' really notice... Because of the stanza issue.. sometimes I don't use stanzas they are so hard to make though... hmm....
Words can't express the way I feel toward you,
But I can do my best,
Alex you are special to me,
In each and every way,
But I don't want to risk losing you this day.
I'm going to say it once and for all,
I love you Alex,
I've made the call.
My heart is not that big,
But your making it grow,
Your showing me things,
I wouldn't have known.
Your hair, your eyes, your smile, your way,
Only gets better everyday.
You mean the world to me ,
Wheter you think so or not,
The more I get to know you,
I love what I've got.
I'm glad I've got you,
To hold in my arms,
Your personality, your humor, Your charming ways,
Makes you a better person if I had to say.
I hope I didn't intefere,
With friendships and more,
I just need to know,
If you love me or not.
You gave me your hand,
I gave you my heart,
Now show me you've loved me,
From the start,
Give me a signal,
a sign,
ANYTHING,
To prove you love me,
And your here to stay.
Maybe:
There are so many words to describe you
But there is just no way to put it
If it rhmyed I'm sorry I didnt' really notice... Because of the stanza issue.. sometimes I don't use stanzas they are so hard to make though... hmm....
I find this very hard to read because it has no stanzas.
(I'll comment and crit later 'cause I have not much time, but that is the first thing I noticed)
What I mean by that is there is no real way to express the way I feel in words...but I am gonna try anyways....Because you can't express everything through writing...So my point is that even though these words mean something they don't mean Everything
I see a lack of logic in this. "Words cannot express the way I feel toward you." Yet there seems to be quite a lot of words.
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