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Haha, I like this, it's very smart and witty.

I can't pick out much structure or rythm though, so a lot of it is hard to follow. Maybe some quotation marks would work, or revising where you break to make a new line.

I like the way you've used quite a variety of words and punctuation, it adds a lot to the writing. The last line being so short has a great effect too.

Keep up the good work.

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