Published November 5, 2007
[pre]"The Little Things"
The little deeds are the points that make an impact.
The little acts of kindness are what makes all the difference.
Holding open a door or offering a hand are small gifts that often mean alot.
The little things place a smile upon a persons heart.
The little tasks make a person truely happy.
A hug for no reason or a nod out of the blue lets some feel noticed when they feel invisible.
The little things in life are the feats that make the difference in the world.[/pre]
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NOO I like that you are taking space! I actually feel noticed. I someday want to write a book of all my poems! And i said ALL even my sucky ones just to compare how i was and how i became thanks to my ap language/ creative writing teacher. and also my 6th grade teacher that showed me i had a knack for writing.
Very nice! And what this poem is about is very true.
There was a story I was told, one day a young man planed to kill himself, because he had no friends and he was bullied on a daily basis. That day, he dropped his books in the hallway and someone was kind enough to help him pick them up. From that day on the two people were friends. When it was time for there high school reunion, the man told his friend that the day they met, he was going to kill himself, but his random act of kindness, prevented him from doing that, because he finally had a friend.
(Sorry if that makes no sense, and sorry if I took up space on your thread!)
THANKS AGAIN YOU GUYS!
That's is a really grate peace of work! Bravo!
Its very true and I can relate to it!
Nice work!
~ Gwen
How do i keep one flinding your poems when i search randomly? Anyways its awsome! I jsut love it!