"Alive"

by kazie

  • Poetry
  • Other

Published November 5, 2007

[pre]"Alive"

Looking around.
Knowing the world is dark and grey.
Still wanting to be part of it.
Wanting to become real.
The world could be full lucid colors.
But then it'd be a fantasy.
Hold on tight,
Here's a way to fight.
Look at the dullness
and take a stand.
Make the people around you
feel alive.[/pre]

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kazie
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kazie commented Comment · Nov 15, 2007

Thanks i really enjoy when people like my work. i hate that i dont get alot of time to look at others works...

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Maki-Chan
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Maki-Chan commented Comment · Nov 9, 2007

I do like this poem. Its very interesting! Bravo! My complements Kazie!^_^



“Can a magician kill a man by magic?” Lord Wellington asked Strange. Strange frowned. He seemed to dislike the question. “I suppose a magician might,” he admitted, “but a gentleman never could.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell