Published August 23, 2007
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I liked this. I would have liked it more if they had been good friends at the end, with no hard feelings and everyone lived happily ever after, but that's just me
I liked your description of the interaction between the characters. There's nothing specific that I dislike, so I feel somewhat unhelpful 
But good job.