Hewwo @kaydenwrites! @NastyMajesty in here for another (really) quick review xP! nice to see ya-- er you know what I mean lol :3
This is such a sweet poem and - even though I've never had a sibling go off to college (I mean, technically I'd be the first to leave for college lol) it seems exactly like what it would feel like. I can't even imagine not seeing one of my siblings (*cough* sibling I only have one xP) for such a long amount of time. It would totally seem awkward and almost like you have to get to know them again. I really like the second stanza- the flow was really great in this one: [/quote] All my life
I’ve known you.
But you’re different now.
Have I changed too? [/quote] Overall, amazing job! I really enjoyed reading it, keep it up! Keep writing!
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