woo hoo Amelia! yay i can count on you for your insite! thank you!
ok, well the girl doesn't want to be with the guy...at all. she's trying to get the heck away from him because she knows whenever he's around no good can come of it. but the power he has over her won't let her. she likes the "power" not him. i guess you can think of him as the "bad boy" and when they're together she feels like she can get away with anything...do you know what i mean?
oh... and this all is suppose to be rambling going on in her head so i mad parts of it sound rambly =) but thanks for your critic, i appreciate it!
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xjess
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