mp3 is at http://www.13oclock.org/unmade.mp3 if you're interested in hearing the music with it... yes, it's midi and yes, i'm aware that i can't sing... which would be why i play guitar 
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Every time I look around
I see what I have lost and found
Since you.
You’re always in that scene
'Cause you are both and in between
The two.
I’m so unmade without you
So many things undone
Incomplete without you
Taken so for granted, unmade
Like an unthrown hand grenade
I have so many plans for you
With you.
It doesn't have to be this way
Tomorrow's yesterday's today
It's true.
I’m so unmade without you
So many things undone
Incomplete without you
Taken so for granted, unmade
You hide behind your insecurities
Like I hide behind my truth
All this dissolution while I
Hide behind your fears
I’m so unmade without you
So many things undone
Incomplete without you
Taken so for granted, unmade
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