Walking home from school, the wind seemed to whisper into my ear.
"Trouble is coming," it muttered.
The sky darkened and it started to rain. I was all alone. The wind roughly rubbed against my skin. As I started to run, the air pinched my lungs.
Something grabbed my arm and pulled me close. He covered my mouth and sprayed something in my face, which made me blackout.
- - -
When I awoke, I was lost. I was tied to a chair. A shadow crept towards me.
"Moises," I snarled.
"Bella, the little mermaid," he snickered.
"How would you know I was a mermaid?"
"I have people for that sweetheart," he replied, beginning to circle around me.
"What do you want with me Moises?"
"I want you to kiss me, Bella. I want to be 'bonded' to you," he declared grabbing my neck, trying to kiss me.
"NO!!!" I screamed, twisting my head where he couldn't reach my lips.
"Why not?!?"
"Because I don't love you."
He stood up straight and thought about what I had said.
"So. You 'love' that boy, um, what's his name? Oh yes, Jason?'
"Don't you DARE hurt him!!" I yelled twisting trying to get out of the ropes.
"No worries Bella. If you kiss me, I'll let him go."
I began to cry. Why would someone treat me like this? I don't want to be forced to love someone. I started to chill the room. Moises started to get cold and shiver; evidently, I slipped out of the chair and closer to my true love.
I ran to Jason's rescue, he was my only TRUE love. I was meant to bond with him forever.
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