Sometimes I can’t help it but cry.
I don’t cry because it’s sad.
I cry because I think about the past,
And the future.
Are they watching?
Will they watch?
Why did it happen?
What will happen?
I think about him,
So protective,
So playful,
So careful;
The past.
Why?
I also think about him,
So funny,
So playful,
So loving;
The past.
Why?
I think about them.
What will happen?
I am worried,
Scarred,
Afraid,
Will I be alone?
I watch a movie,
I read a book,
I listen to a song.
Sometime I can’t help it but cry.
I don’t cry because it’s sad.
I cry because I thing about the past,
And about the future.
I loved them,
I love them.
I will always love them all.
What will happen?
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Now, with all of the edits....
Overall:
I loved this poem, it just had a whole bunch of filler and unnecessary repetition.
All you need to do is make sure that you say only what you need to in order to get the point across.
Engage the reader, give detail.
But it's lovely.
Spelling is flawless.
Nice job!
Keep Writing!
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-Jojo
All in all, I enjoyed it. It's kind of mysterious, as you don't really tell us what happened, you just ask quesitons, which can make it personal for anyone really. Good job!