Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two reviews. You will probably never see this but....Imma do this anyway.
First Impression: Hmm...well this was indeed a very simple and quite funny story. It was quite fun to read and to present the whole thing through a police officer made it just that much more entertaining and a little grounded in reality. The pacing was also great and the overall flow was quite nice.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Ugh, if theirs one day I’ll never forget in my life it’s the day I got overdosed. I’m just lucky no one realized that I was drugged up at the time; otherwise I’m pretty sure I wouldn’t be were I am now…
That's a neat opening line. Immediately drags you in there and tells you that something serious is going on here. Great choice.
Anyway, long story short, I arrested both the dealer and the buyer without sustaining any injury to myself, minus a few scratches, along with obtaining over at least a ton in illegal drugs, all in one night. Not a bad start to my law enforcement carrier, if I do say so myself. Of course, this was all before I got drugged up.
Now that would be a story to see how on Earth this guy managed to pull this off alone. Were they all napping or something?
If only I had done a proper search on the two dealers; how the hell was I supposed to know that the second one had a lockpick hidden inside the lining of his jacket? Completely weaponless, with back up about to arrive, the only thing he could do was throw a powdery version of the drug in my face before running off.
Well you can only blame yourself there for not searching them thoroughly enough.
Thankfully, I realized that I was hallucinating when the bins suddenly grew fangs and started snapping at my heels. That, and the two gladiators that suddenly started fighting upside down in mid-air…
*is laughing very hard at the moment*
Anyway, after getting past the bouncer, who I thought looked like giant sponge, I entered the club, caught sight of the dealer, before stopping dead and starring at the sight of Satan and a few other demons dancing on the center of the stage. In reality, they were strippers, but I still couldn’t help but gawk at them, even after I had caught the dealer after running around the stage after him.
*falls of chair*
Aaand that's it for that one. A great ending line there too. That is a line that I am not likely to ever forget either.
Overall: Overall it was a really fun story to read and its a really fun little idea. There's no proper character development or anything but as a fun short story it does it job admirably well and that is a great thing.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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