Aye Rose...I need to get back into reviewing and I thought "HEY...WHY NOT REVIEW ONE OF MY FRIENDS TO GET BACK IN THE SWING OF THINGS..." and then I thought "HEY....WHY NOT REVIEW ONE OF MY FAVORITE POEMS THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN." So yeah here we go:
I remember reading this back in November and regret not reviewing it when you published it. (better late then never) and I just LOVED this poem! I think it was the format mixed with your diction that just mmmmm it totally drew me into reading it. I love some of the words you used like "beaming". When I read that line, it put an image in my head of a flashback between two people before a big fight. It's very applicable across any relationship between any two people. Someone looking back on a fight to the good times. I find myself doing this a lot and this poem BEAUTIFULLY painted a picture in my mind that was very personal. One of my favorite lines in this poem was
sipping sweet drinks and appreciating the rays of daylight
I love the use of alliteration (i see you...figurative language mmm) and the sweetness of this line. It's good contrast rather than staying on the bitter side most people take.
Overall it is a super relatable and has good use of formatting and diction. Word choice, to me, plays a huge role in the overall structure.
~Galaxy <3
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