Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review courtesy of the revmo checklist challenge...disclaimer, I don't usually review poems, so this might not be very good, but I will try and tell you what I think this means...and what I felt like reading it.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Alright, so well, the literal appears to be someone that seems to be thinking of leaving someone or breaking up almost there towards the start because there's some kind of barrier between these two people...and then we go onto them potentially getting past that somehow and embracing while the world just straight up end behind them.
But of course, with this being an actual poem, that's almost certainly not what's its actually supposed to mean, so getting a bit deeper than what's literally spelled out here, I once again get that interesting duality. I can't shake the idea that the first couple of paragraphs is about a breakup, potentially something that's forced having to happen in the near future due to being seperated from each other for some reason or the other.
Now the fence, the fence is interesting, its seems to be so many things at once. It could be some kind of physical barrier that will eventually separate the two like an outside interference but at the same time I feel like its referring to the person in question being a bit untouchable for some reason and the person speaking feels somehow unworthy of the other or something like that but then of course they seem to go through with it. That's the passage that definitely made me think quite a bit.
Then we talk about what appears to be showcasing how well the two know each other, shows that they've been together for so long they know each other by memory and then of course somehow this barrier is breached and it seems like everything falls apart because something horrible happens and the relationship crashes or...potentially what I think is more likely is that the love engulfs them like fire...or something along those lines.
Well...yeah, that's about what I've gotten from this one. I love the continued use of fire, its a very consistent theme and it seems to really enforce how passionate this is. It was a pretty fun poem to read here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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