*I wrote this for school and wondered what you would think of it. Please review below*
That was the first time I saw you. Dawn was breaking and the
sun bled its fiery hues into the sky as it rose like a majestic swan. You blew
across the beach like a fresh breeze. Your feet were made of the sand; your
arms were the palm trees and your eyes were a reflection of the azure ocean.
You were the epitome of elegance. You walked with the grace of a dancer and the
precision of a gymnast. When you reached the sea, the curious waves lapped at
your bare feet like eager puppies. You were facing the water, and black waves
of hair swam down your back like molten onyx. The golden rays of the rising sun
caressed your skin whilst the gentle wind lightly tousled your hair with tender
care. Then, your head turned. In an instant, you took me in and flashed me an elfish
grin. I was smitten.
Love at first sight? A tad cliché in this modern day and age?
Not where you were concerned. It took every ounce of my self-control
to refrain from covering the metres between us in a few, swift steps and reaching
out to you. Instead, I merely contented myself with spectating. I retreated to
the woodland so you presumed I’d left and spent the rest of the afternoon
contentedly watching you caper around the beach like a free spirit.
When I next saw you, it was autumn the same year. Leaves
began to part from the trees and form vibrant clusters on the pavement. I was
traipsing along, homeward bound, when you called out my name.
I turned around, surprised to see you. I was taken aback by
your knowing my name. You introduced yourself and insisted it was on your way
to walk me home. Only months later did I realise that you lived miles in the
opposite direction.
We exchanged numbers. Then, you began to visit. Initially, it
was just every few months. We became casual friends. Then, your visits became
increasingly frequent. My heart would mourn if I went a week without laying
eyes on you. I think it was about that time that I realised there were no two ways
about it; I had to tell you how I felt. Even though I knew you’d reject me like
an unwanted invitation, I still needed to let you know. I couldn’t carry on
living in denial.
The day I told you started like any other. The weather was
cold and dreary. Rain spat angrily at the ground and wind tore at the windows,
trying to force itself inside. You perched elegantly on the edge of my bed, curiosity
etched across your face. I’d been suspiciously awkward all morning. You’d
noticed, of course. You had looked unfathomably beautiful in slate grey jeans
and a checked shirt. Your hair was lazily tied in a high ponytail, yet it still
looked perfect. These details convinced me that there was no point
procrastinating what was clearly inevitable. I told you. Blushing deeply and
staring at the ground, I told you.
That was the second best day of my life. Why? Because you
said the same back to me. You told me how you felt similarly.
We were married two years later. That was the best day of my
life.
All that time, hopeful wishes blossomed in my mind like
unquenchable hopes and dreams. I imagined knowing you for the rest of my life,
writing our names in the stars beside each other. I envisioned our destinies
entwining like knotted rope; journeying across an endless abyss with only you
to catch me if I fell. I had never doubted the infinite length of this bond: I
knew we were born to have each other.
That is why, my dear, I had never imagined this. My mind had
never strayed so far into the morbid depths of my imagination to suggest that I
would be here, a mere eight years after our first encounter, saying my final
goodbye. In my dreams, you never ended up unreachable beneath an impenetrable
layer of soil. In my dreams, your name was never inscribed upon a solid block
of archaic stone.
In my dreams, you never died.
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