Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language and violence.
I need to cut my veins free, escape this body, wrangle myself out with every glug of scarlet, just can’t fucking BREATHE, shit okay, today we need to slit open fat gapers, friends to grin at me! Ooh yes, yes, those dribbly cherry tongues puddling in the middle, which will allow them to- AH- gasp and suck oxygen, through their butter-yellow bean teeth! I just- just need to fucking ESCAPE, I’m suffocating inside this meat-glove, and I am screamed at to grind my teeth around a raw knife and – Oh! – wedge it deep between my joints. Hurry up and oyster-shuck the rotten weights of limbs from your torso, you stupid whore.
Please, please just let me float away with the iron aroma. I promise, when I finally meet the royal purple of fascia, I will dissipate with my giggle.
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