I felt like I was there reaching for the light my self, and when I got to the end only to find that the light has escaped from my grasp, it did make me feel kind of sad. I guess we could all use a fresh start at some point in our lives. Enough of me going on about me though, I did like how you used your starting few limes to end it. I believe they all wet perfectly together. Don't mind my crappy typing and all my typos as I am typing this in the dark. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to you writing more in the near future.
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