Published August 26, 2009
the fear
born on an idea
it whispers in your ear
the voice of fear
buried in the hearts of many
their minds fogged with secrets
a disease of their creation
a monster of destruction
it feeds on thoughts gone astray
beckoning on its prey
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heyy there!!
i really liked the concept of this one! but i was kinda dissapointed when u ended it abruptly! would have really liked it more if there was more to it!!