Thanks for the info about limericks. Obviously, I don't pay attention to terminology; I just write, haha.
I really appreciate everything that you said, and I'm definitely going to take the advice to heart. My writing style has always been very blunt, and I think I write that way because it's what I prefer to read. This is probably bad, but I think I write more for myself than the reader...oops. Haha.
I believe that metaphors and polysyndetons and other literary devices can be beautiful, but I get enough of them in english class. I understand this probably makes me seem a bit...err...dim in my writing, but I've always loved choppy, short, simple phrases. They are what affect me the most as a writer and a reader.
Anyways, thanks again for the response, and I will definitely make a few changes. I just wanted to let you know where I'm coming from. (:
Jen
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