I am so obsessed with The Wizard of Oz that i wrote few verse on it and i would like to share it with you people over here. I am a bit confused whether i have put it in the correct category or not. It is my first lyrics which i have ever written so please go a bit easy on it.
There, lives a wizard. He is the wizard of oz. Every art of wizardry, he has mastered. He is the greatest there ever was.
As mighty, as the blizzard. As clever, as the leopard. The only thing missing in his life, are flaws. He is the great wizard of oz.
He gives bravery, to the coward. And calmness, to the angered. Because. Because. Because. He is the greatest there ever was.
He fills love, in lovebirds. Humor, in sense of humor. And, see, in the seesaw. He is the great wizard of oz.
He lives in the city of Emerald. It is the city the dangles. Everyone, give him an applause. He is the great wizard of oz.
There, lives a wizard. He is the wizard of oz. Every art of wizardry, he has mastered. He is the greatest there ever was.
I have never reviewed anything lyrical before, simply because I know nothing about lyric writing. So i will treat this like a poem. I quite like the reparation. As a piece this is pretty good but i can't really tell how good but it's doesn't sound like the greatest song ever written, maybe because
He fills love, in lovebirds.
I don't really think ' fills' is the right word. I don't think it's grammatically correct.
The only thing missing in his life, are flaws.
Can't see how this works. But then again i can't here the actual song. Sorry for the bad review , I'm a novice at this.
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I have never reviewed anything lyrical before, simply because I know nothing about lyric writing. So i will treat this like a poem. I quite like the reparation. As a piece this is pretty good but i can't really tell how good but it's doesn't sound like the greatest song ever written, maybe because
I don't really think ' fills' is the right word. I don't think it's grammatically correct.Can't see how this works. But then again i can't here the actual song.
Sorry for the bad review