Hi! I'm SpaceSnickerdoodle. This poem was written awhile ago, but I was looking for poems to read/review and I found this and thought it was very pretty. I love the metaphors, the rhyming, and the imagery. It flows together perfectly.
This may be silly, but I also like the font. It fits the poem topic and style very well.
One thing I liked was that the grammar was wonderful (I like grammar..), such as "bereft", "forsaken", and "theft". Large words usually make a poem seem more professional and endearing, at least to me.
As far as the spelling of words, all I noticed is "forsakened", which is supposed to be "forsaken" according to Google. The lowercase i's make sense in this type of genre, to me.
I also liked the use of esophagus.
Overall, I like it!
Great job!
-Space
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