Published October 9, 2006
Slick Jimmy is SUCH a tool.
-Slick Jimmy
He's one of the crowd
and speaks up aloud
of things he may not understand.
He's a tool of sorts
but just like at sports
he's not that good at his craft, and;
what will it be then
will become of he when
Nobody will hear and act kind?
Perhaps we will see
a long shooting spree
From the clock tower he built in his mind.
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slick!!!!