How many red suns had to drown in this ocean to turn it so green?
Razor reefs: Land's End, ship's end
Rust, beached upon orange rocks
The wind tumbles its wild heart to you in apology
The tide chases up the beach -
Soft crystalline water
Swash and swallow the sand.
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