Published April 6, 2008
verse one: Life it seems so Complicated but for a girl it seems so drama associated. All the boys in the shop all the twist and the turns all the gossip to stop when will we learn. All the knowledge from school dose not apply to the teenage life were livin'. Its not easy to do but i cant complain cause i do it everyday.
Chorus one: my heart fades away and i hate the world everyday. Stress from school and parents to man it sucks to be a teenager the courage that it takes it blows me away and i can't get back on my feet. Burning up the dream you had before..... then let clouds appear and fade away your shame.
Verse two: So i guess this is where it ends. Searching though teenage life for the end . Backing into walls and all that drama too. Cinderella had a crappy begging and it seem like everything was ending when she stop to catch her breath and it ended in a happy ending. So why can't i be cinderella is it just because i'm me i'll never know the answer to that because i'm still searching.
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