Nice to meet you, confetti. Today, I'll be reviewing you work.
My goodness, what an amazing story that you have here. O_O It felt like an elaborate poem, the way it was built. In particular, your imagery and descriptions are sheer beauty, and I love the way that you conveyed this world of emotions and thoughts within a single paragraph. The story starts out with an eye-catching opening - discussing a man who had once like the color blue because it was how he imagined his insides - and then goes onto to provide all sorts of wonders to the reader's mind. You captivate and enthrall your reader throughout the entirety of this story, sending them along this path of not only memories, but of a world of sights, sounds, and the reader's graceful surroundings. You even managed to take a point of view not often used - second point of view - and conveyed it so excellently within this poem. In all, this is simply beautiful to read.
There were a few parts of the story that I, perhaps, enjoyed the most. I enjoyed every one of the examples where the reader is drawn into the story, and the narrator invokes memories. The burning pies, the corner of the room, the reader's mother humming were all so beautifully conveyed. Your usage of details made each scene so vivid. I could see each memory as though I were participant of the memories you describe. I can envision those feelings, the emotions, and even all of the senses. I can feel the sadness and see the mystery and feelings of reading a new book - I can quite clearly picture all of your emotions. They were incredibly well-built, and do a nice job of intertwining the reader into the story, making their experience even stronger and more profound. I even liked how you showed the blazing sky and how it feels in the eyes of the reader, but how, despite how rugged it looks, the stars are dancing so gracefully across the scene. Those images left a strong impression in my mind, and it was a nice element in your story. It illustrated both the beauty and fear in our world, and was incredible.
In conclusion, words cannot describe how much I appreciate this poem. It is a journey of memories of all kinds, a magnificent quest across the realms of thoughts, sights, sounds, and the mystical world around us. It opened beautifully, and concluded just as well. Your descriptions and imagery are something to be beheld, and I enjoyed reading this story from start to finish. No, not even enjoyed - I hung onto every word, jumping from exquisite detail to detail in the course of the story. Thank you for this story, confetti. Well done!
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