His height and muscle size seemed almost threatening to me. With my size he could have easily over powered me. What I lacked in muscles, though, I gained in my speed.
I sneered at him. "Samuel, such a burden to see you alive."
"Now now. Why such violent words? Just come with us and there will be no need for blood to be spilled. Although I'm sure my friends and I wouldn't mind to snack on a royal. We do have the antidote for our bites for it. It would just be a bit more painful-"
Thankfully, someone else entered and he caught my attention, enough so I tuned out Samuel's rambling. He was taller than Samuel and had the type of looks that would make any other vampyre jealous. He seemed to lack muscles, but if it was him and Samuel, I had a feeling the other vampyre would win.
I looked back to Samuel as I noticed he had stopped talking. A snarl erupted from his throat as he took a hesitant step forward. I automatically moved back and felt my heel run into something. It was the stake. Without thinking any longer, I moved.
Adrenaline rushed through me and I picked up the stake. With the jewel around my neck brightening up, the stake lit up. The fire only surrounded it and I controlled both weapons. With my eyes shining as intensely as my jewel, I attacked the closest vampyre. He was twice as big as me and probably ten times stronger, but I was faster. I kicked him in the stomach once and he hesitated, just what I needed. I jumped at him and stabbed the fire enclosed stake into his chest. He immediately turned into dust and bones under me.
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I have decided to post a little more on the chapter. Hopefully it's just as good as the last part. =3
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I like this and have read both parts of this chapter.
I must say that I am very curious of what may happen to her.
I can't see any mistakes, but I'm not a very good reviewer so I apologize if there are mistakes and I couldn't see any.
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