Hello there!
Wow. That was really powerful. I love that, it's completely honest and true. That was great; I hope it gets recongized by someone important and we're singing it in Church soon. x[}
(verse 1)
I could never ask for more than you have given me;
The Son that you adore you sent to set me free.
I love you more than life just as you love me.
And I apologize: I was blind but now I see.
(chorus)
You are God above,
And I will worship you;
I will worship you.
You are the God of love,
And I will worship You;
I will worship you.
(verse 2)
You are greater than the songs that we sing to you;
Despite how hard we try, it's just a simple tune.
Still you are satisfied with the meager things we do.
You give to me your life as I give my all to you.
Chorus
(bridge)
Oh Lord I love you more than words can say!
Lord, I want to praise you in every single way.
Oh Lord I love you more than words can say!
Lord I want to praise you every single day.
Chorus
Chorus
Guitar: (ignore this if you don't care)
Capo 2
Verse: C D Em D C D Em D
Chorus: G D C D G D C D
Bridge: G C D Em G C D Em G C D Em G C D Em
Hello there!
Wow. That was really powerful. I love that, it's completely honest and true. That was great; I hope it gets recongized by someone important and we're singing it in Church soon. x[}
Wow, this is really beautiful, so virtual chocolate chip cookies to you. XD This is a lovely song and if I was at all musical I would have learnt it by now, but I'm not and I sold my unused guitar months ago. But you've really captured the essence of worship here - I'm completely aware I'm not making much sense here - and the song is lovely, well done.
It's really great to know I'm not the only Christian around here, too. <3
I really like this; I find that I am really bad at writing worship songs, so kudos to you.
The only thing, sorry to be picky with spelling, but since this is a worship song, I noticed you say "you" a lot, referring to God, but you haven't capitalized it.
And I'm a little iffy about verse 2. I feel like you should reword it a bit. 'Tune' is throwing me off; it doesn't really fit.
I'm glad you gave the chords, I played it out with my guitar and it sounded great.
Good luck with it tomorrow.
-Mechi
This words are positive! They can wake up somebody from sadness. Oh, it would be great, if people would love the God as your lyrical character does. You wrote song, which will let people understand, that the life is great, and God gave to us this great thing.
So, very good!
Antonina. 
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