Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!!
Hm... School pain. Literally, a lot of problems in the school. I really like how you described the pain in quite a funny way. You could have put it in humorous genre, I think. Also, realistic too wouldn't be a bad suit. Now with the capitalization. I wonder why you didn't capitalize the 'i's. Is it just a hint that your brain is not working properly due to the stress of school? That could be an interpretation of it. I really like the repetition. It did a good job emphasizing the fact that students have to go to school everyday and face the same problems a thousand if not more in lifetime. And wow, that scene of entering the classes. i know the feeling! And bus catching is an all time problem. Overall, this was quite a great piece of work. School school school. The title was... We often speak about the school like that.
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