Hey, Raelyn
First off, I have to say that this poem is really good. You didnt try to overthink it.
Sometimes, when people write poems (especially ones that rhyme) they can feel bit... Cartoon-y or just fall into a nursery rhyme rhythm, but that didnt happen here. It felt as though you were really careful. This was short and sweet.
Once again, really good job on this. Keep writing😁
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