yeah, i realize i REALLY have to edit this. I'll be working on it, and thanks for all your help.
Does this poem even make sense? Because if it doesn't please feel free to ask me questions about it, I don't want to turn it in to school without anybody understanding what I'm trying to say.
Here's my quick edit:
A wise man once said,
"If money grew on trees,
would you go and get an axe?
Or wait for the falling leaves?"And I thought,
"Of course I'll use the axe, collecting what I own.
Who would let the leaves dive down onto the grass right in front of their home?"
I'm really going to have to work on this stanza
What if the tree was your life,
And every leaf was precious time...
Would you get your axe,
Accomplish what's yours,
Or let those moments decay on the floor?
If I'm high, besotted, or blind
Of course I'm wasting my time.
I've got 86 more years to live
And I don't intend to waste it.
Before any leaf touches the ground
You can bet I'm gonna take it.
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