Broken
Torn
Forlorn
No one to hold my hand
Or help me try to stand
To comfort me in times of need
And make me stronger than a reed
Because you do that for another
Though we’re perfect for each other
But you only see a friend
And you’ll see me so to the end
I can’t stand it any more
I don’t know what I’m waiting for
I could tell you she’s a whore
Then I’d lose you forevermore.
Its not fair that she gets the good boy
When she should be the girl using the toy
But even the boys that don’t want a whore
They get them-almost more.
So why should I sit and cry?
Why not go after a slutty guy?
I couldn’t get him, that’s why.
I won’t do and I won’t screw.
So I guess I have to sit and wait
Until
The
Day up
The boys grow ^
And they see
Like me
They want someone they can love
They can trust
They can hold and know will never let them go.
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