Published December 14, 2011
“~Gone in the past~
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Heya Shinda
I liked this chapter. I now understand why Kate and Jeffery are fighting a bit more, and what the troops want. The remaining survivors and the royal family inside. But now my question is... how are they different from the other troops. Why are there so little of them left? It was a very interesting chapter, full with lots of detail which was nice to know. I understand that Kate is very strong and quick, and very good with logic. She really likes Jeffery. But is this as a family, or partnership thing?
Good chapter. Good detail, very engaging. Interested to see what happens next, and maybe not all my questions are going to be answered right away. But I would like some more background information on why there are troops attacking, although I think we have the gist of it now.
Deanie x