Published December 22, 2007
"OH, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!"
"Sorry!"
She sighed, "Just get on with it..."
She opened it up.
Looking dumbfounded, the man fumbled about.
Noticing this, the woman stated, "You have NO idea what you're doing, do you?"
"I'm... I-I'm kinda inexperienced."
"Thought so. See that over there?" She pointed to a long object, on the other end of the room, hard to recognize.
The man squinted. "Y.. Yeah..."
"Use it THERE."
"THERE?!?!"
"YES!"
"Alright, fine... whats up YOUR alley, anyway?"
"That you're such an IDIOT!"
As he came back, the man's face was ruddy.
"Don't be so angry at ME!"
"I'm not angry!"
"Then what is it?"
"I'm just... a little embarassed."
"Why?"
The man was silent.
"WHYY?"
"You're--"
"A woman?"
"And I should be more experienced than you..."
"Sexist pig! Just gimme tha damn wrench."
As she swiped it, she hastily got to work on the car, leaving the man to do something else.
"...Idiot...."
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Wow. I get the joke. Wow. And then it turns out to be they're working on the car. Wow.
I was amused, not sure what people didn't understand. A lot of dialogue can be confusing but this piece did a decent job of keeping the flow going. I laughed at my computer. Keep having fun!
Some kinda of fun, but I need to know who is whom. Since I know they are girls, I am not sure who is going to talk first, talk less and talk plus.
Tags in conversation, please.
I got it, but I don't find it funny.
Don't take offense please.
I'm not even sure if I got it right.
>.>
Yours truly,
Memento Mori
Reading this placed a smile on my face!
lol. I liked it. Why is there only a few people that get it? I don't want to explain it or else it might take some of the funny away... hah. still very funny.
I wish I could do something like this.
I read this times and I didn't get it. I even asked my friend to read it and she didn't understand it. Welcome to YWS and good luck!!!
lol i totally love how only the people over 15 understood this. (except Moe...sorry...)
anyway, it made me giggle.
this made no sense wat so ever to me... it needs alot of reediting it looks like you just jotted something down and decided to post it
lol. Cute. I liked it. I have a while file of little (very unsuccessful) dialogs that at the time were meant to be funny. =P Nice.
Ummm...
What the...heck?
This really confused me. And I don't get the joke.
????????
Teh Wozzinator
AAAAaaaahhhhhhh! I really don't get this. Is it sorta the thing i wouldn't get because I'm 12 (if so then i'm really sad.) Wait, is it a joke because he didn't know she was u know... a she. and that she is better with tools. U know what? don't answer. because I don't think I'll get that either.
Thanks for posting a joke, even though I didn't get it.
Haha! Cute. ^_^ I've never seen anyone post jokes before. Good work! ^_^
Well... this was... odd. Very dialogue dependant, which made it weird and a little irritating. Also, what's meant to be going on?
I'm so confused...