Scream into the void. Scream
into the darkness, dream, dream
of the spaces between One and Zero, On and Off
scream, so the void may hear, for it may seem
hopeless, empty
It is not
It is not empty, where electricity once was
between each blip, each keyboard pause
we hear the voices, kin to kin
the silent “likes”, “kudos”, applause
for words found
In hearts
In our hearts, we share, we write, we draw
we wrest from artificial jaw
our skills. Our blood, our passion, our love
with each desperate breath, we claw
we scream
We scream
We scream into the void, we share, we share
our love, our hope, for it all, our care
for the void may seem empty, between On and Off
One and Zero, electron flare
it echoes
It echoes back
Our voices. And we’re screaming.
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That was so true. Your writing is so gorgeous. My only question is if this is a commentary on social media, or a different part of technology? I love how this poem is so blunt. Technology is a blessing, but when misused, it can feel like it's weighing down. I think the repetition of the screaming is very smart. Especially since when things are posted online, it is like screaming into a void. It makes a person feel validated, but only so many people actually look at their post. Anyways, enough of my tangent! I loved this poem, and I think that you truly did a wonderful job! Keep writing, you are so good at it! Also, I like how you don't directly say that technology is the problem, you say why it is. And that is so cool!!!