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i like them. Never been a big fan og Hiaku's but i like the way these ones flow all together. they string themselves like a rope. Over all all three of them are very good.
Keep writing! Hawinay
I really liked how the last line connects to the title of the next part. "Black rose bleeding red" is just great. The only thing I'm questioning is the apostrophe in the title.