Lol, so I interpreted it as though god was speaking. You that is cool that you are showing that kind of Idea in your poem. But I say one part puzzled me. If this piece was as if god was talking then why in stanza three it says " The birds sing, The cricket sung a song at noon, Red-tailed hawks fly low, but if I stay, I will be there." I don't know a little confusion for the fans huh? I guess we will have to figure that part out for ourselves but overall excellent poem. Love the flow and attention you put into this piece and cant wait to read more of your work.
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