Hello! Izzy here for a review!
I am not that great at poetry reviews but I love doing them! So here we go!
The first few lines really got me, and that's a good way to get the readers attention and to make sure they enjoy the work.
My favorite part was the end where she joins a freak show and she is viewed as a freak instead of a wonder.
umm, not good at this, haha.
Maybe to make the words flow better, use more descriptive language and see where it takes you.
Sorry for the weird/bad review!
Hoping you are well, Izzy.
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