Hey it's NewYork here for a review.
I love the contrast between the two lovers as night and day because it gives me a glimpse as to who these two are as people because of the different qualities of night and day. "Sunset eyes" and "autumn leaf hair" really grabbed my attention. It was a really good usage of descriptive writing. You are also very good at using imagery in this poem. Keep on writing!!!
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