Published October 18, 2010
Making Doctors
Life has it’s own anatomy. Just like we do. We can go through life without discovering a tumor. A tumor which may have been the cause for our prolonged lack of sleep, for our constant change of mood, and our disorderly behavior. That tumor can be eating us alive, and we wouldn’t know it. But when life gets a tumor; it’s a whole nother story. We can see it, the tumor, and not do anything. We remain ignorant, to what is clear as day.We are our own tumor, most of the time, which makes it hard for us to blame it on somebody. And when we are our own tumors, we try to blame anyways. But in the end, it’s just us. We are the tumors. This is life. Life has it’s own anatomy.
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Well thanks for the advice, first of all. I will try to see if I can make it into something. It was mainly just an idea that came to my head late at night....But we'll see. Thanks again.
Hi there.
You should make this into the beginning of a story. Possibly a story about doctors. Yes. That would be good.
-Aussie