Published October 22, 2006
Thick red juice, pounds through the chambers
Lined with fuel, coated in poison
Millions of sacs, squeezed in two bags
Sorting bursts of air, pushing bad out
One sponge of purple juice, crinkled through and through
Controlling actions, processing thoughts
One lump of muscle, left and right
Beats life into the body, keeps us alive
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hi i like this poem it really makes me think about the human body
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