Crash! Alex shot up out of bed frightened by the loud noise. He starred at his window seeing it was growing a bright green. He crawled out of bed slowly making his way toward his window. He reached out and separated the blinds so he could peek outside. Blinded for a moment his eyes adjusted to the light and he could a giant creator in the ground. Alex was completely scared from what he just saw.
Since he was home alone and lived a hundred miles away from the nearest neighbor. He was the only one who seen or probably heard the crash. He backed away from the window .He crept to his door and quietly opened afraid that something anything would hear him. he tiptoed to the backdoor and slowly slid open the screen door. Alex crept over to see what was in the giant hole, as he grew near he peeked over the side. All he saw was this glowing green glob. Alex stared in horror seeing the goo rising to the top of the hole.
The giant glob sat for a brief moment till it started to form. In a second it took shape and gained color. It looked just like Alex with short black hair and same dark brown eyes.. Alex dropped the bat as it reached out and grabbed him by the throat. It started suck Alex in as if he was paralyzed. It swallowed Alex whole and began to eat everything it could reach.
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