It’s been awhile
since I’ve seen you smile
and my heart breaks for you
this pain I can’t undo
I know you’re thinking it through
and trying to decide whats best for you
So many voices you could listen to
and The truth won’t change for you
Please slow down
long enough to turn around
and see who is seeking you
Love is pleading with you
you’d be so easy to find
If you decide to never hide
And the truth could change you
if you want it to
Oh I know you’ve got the blues
So scared you'll always lose
I know its dark and cold where you are
and all hope seems so far
One tiny spark
could light up your heart
Oh the truth will change you
When you want it to
I'm here, no matter what we go through
You've already tried living a lie
and you know its true
Let this unchanging love, change you.
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