"Si," he replied, making her laugh. She always laughed at how terrible his attempts at Spanish sounded.
I mean, on the one hand I like the idea of Rhys attempting to speak her first language to her in her own home and being very bad at it and her just laughing because she loves him...but on the other hand, including this detail here when all he's said is "sí" is a bit odd.
(On that note, sí has an accent mark over the i. If there's no accent mark, it's "if," not "yes." It's like papa vs papá (the first is "potato," the second is "dad.")
It also sort of throws me that Lip called it Taco Tuesday but then there keeps being talk of burritos, but that's a minor detail. Mostly I'm angry because I've been reading about burritos for the last two installments but I don't have any at home and I want some.
I really like that Rhys has a healthy family he can go to and be part of. Having read further, I know this isn't the case, but I'm kind of hoping we see more of them/they come up more. Like if the Garcia parents consider Rhys as another son, I'd expect them to check up on him more or for him to go see them more or...I don't know, but I'd like to see more of this. There's so much in Rhys' life that's totally screwed up that I'd like to see more of this family that cares for him like one of their own
Otherwise, I'm a bit curious about the Garcias' apartment - I don't need a full layout like we got for Rhys and Ethan's apartment, especially because depending on how many bedrooms it is the layout might actually be identical - but it'd be nice to get a feel for how the Garcias' apartment differs from Ethan and Rhys'. Is it neater? Messier? Are there toys lying around? (I don't know how old Lip's brother is.) Is the furniture newer? Older but matches better/is in better condition? Do they have a crucifix hanging up somewhere? I get a good general feel for them as a family and in relation to Rhys, but details about their apartment that set it apart from Rhys and Ethan's would paint a much more vivid picture.
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