Published September 23, 2007
My very first song I wrote. I think I was in Gr. 6.
My life
1 part
Now,now,now
This is my life
I didn’t know that
It could end like this.
So here it is
Don’t be scared I
Wont be a coward
Feel I can’t go on
It’s to much for me
Yet, I will try.
Will be optimistic so
Don’t ask why.
(Chorus)
This is my battle
This is my war
This is my life
This is my soul.
I will go on
I will suffer
For you…for you
2 part
I’ll always wonder
Why I didn’t come for you.
Life is strange
Don’t know why but,
I’d rather go with you.
(Chorus)
3 part
So Ill try!
And I’ll fly
Don’t you cry.
You were made to shine.
(Chorus) x2
Goodbye.
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I love this! It's so simple but it has a melody...it's sort of like Cecilia by Simon&Garfunkel but it's also We Will Rock You-ish. I love this. I was singing the whole song. Amazing!
That was such a great song you wrote. I feel like there's meaning behind it.
Just make sure to check your spacing.
Overall, it was amazing!