Published November 7, 2007
(Stats with the instruments)
Yeah!
(Instruments)
Now...Now it's
This is my life
I didn't know that
it could end like this
So here it is,
don't be scared I
won't be a coward,
I feel I can't go on,
it's too much for me
yet I will try
I will be optimistic...so
don't ask why... (echo)
Chorus
This is my battle
this is my war
this is my life
this is my soul
I will go on
I will suffer
for you...
for you...
(Instruments play for 4 bars)
Verse 2
I'll always wonder why,
I didn't come for you
in the nick of time.
Life is sometimes strange
you can't hold on the
things you really love...
Chorus
Don't know what you call this.(Bridge for now)
So I'll try!
and I'll fly!
Don't go and cry.
You were made to shine.
Bridge again but with an extra voice. Everytime the line is finished, the second voice sings the last word except for the third line he sings the entire line and the fourth line he sings with the lead singer only in a different tone.
Chorus x2
Instruments play for 8 bars.
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Wow, pretty power stuff here.
I don't know why but I imagined it to play along to the tune of Sorcery by uhm.. Audio Damage. It kinda had that feel to it; more jammy and rave-ish that rock or anything.
I like the "Nick of time..." thing. That was a good little twist kinda thing.
Gosh, I hope that helps.