I like this, probably because it's easy to relate to. You might want to separate it into stanzas to make it easier to read. Also,
I've lost who I am.
I hate myself,
though I do what I can.
This seems a little like you chose the last line just because you were searching for something to rhyme with "am".
Other than that, good work.
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