Forever I lay
Bare, but open
Still, but silent
Welcome all of the uncharted
Heavenly lights bind me now
Hell's temptations draw me down
One thousand hands hidden
By two million eyes
Dare to watch
As I reach for the sky
Silent mouths
Blow still breaths
Forever screaming echo's
Of eternal death
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