Published March 30, 2008
“Tell me I’m in Love”
My dreams almost came true
when I first laid my eyes upon you
I hate it when we part
I’d love to hit re-start
please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well
You walk by, looking at me
you glide away carelessly
I stand in a pit of shame
wishing you knew my name
please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well
If only you knew how I feel
I think our love could be real
and I know I could make a deal
it’s your heart that I wish to steal
please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well
please God, oh please God
now I know that this is love
watching this women from above
there’s no Satan there’s no hell
I know that this will end well, oh I know that this will end well
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Cool. I liked it. This would most likely to fit into a song.
yeah SCL I've been thinking about taking that line out and changing it, and thanks for the advice.
Hello I am SimonCowellLuver just call me SCL. Alright not bad, not bad at all i like it. But I just didn't understand this one stanza here (posted below)
please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well
What is the point of satan i think you wanna re write the line because it makes no sense at all. Well if you have any questions feel free to pm me.
Thanks ^_^
SimonCowellLuver/SCL