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Eagle at his Highest

by Shasta


A flash of gold,
A glint of steel,
And I behold,
Those eyes, so real.

A sudden lift,
Of bright bronze wings,
He seems to drift,
And then he flings,

His body toward,
A silver streak,
The bright reward,
Of lakes, so bleak.

He ends his dive,
His talons flash,
The silver fish,
And bright claws clash.

He soars away,
A speck of gold,
With secret tales,
All left untold.


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Sun May 13, 2007 11:31 pm



Wow, great imagery! That was really great -and it did flow very nicely :D




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Sun Apr 29, 2007 7:31 pm
Shasta says...



Thank you! I wrote it months ago...




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Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:41 am
Mad says...



I really like it, it's nice, simple and the rhythm that you use (4 syllables, I think) works nicely and allows your poem to flow really well.





History repeats itself. First as tragedy, second as farce.
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