Published August 10, 2006
Mighty Chopsticks
In the hand
Of
The
Supreme Spider Warrior
Send chills down spider arms
But not their legs
And then they swim away
But not fast enough
For
None
Escape
The Spider Warrior, and if they do
I'll send my sharks
Who'll run as fast as they can
And if that doesn't work
I'll call Willy Chips
Third cousin's
Neighbor's
Milkman
of the infamous
Geoffrey
Chaucer
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Not bad? Really quite perfect, I think.
Interesting. Different. Funny. Not bad.
Sweet. Nothing negative to say. Just...sweet.