Credit (or blame) to @soundofmind for giving me this crackbrained idea
Heyo ShadyVypy! I totally could not resist the urge to review this satirical beauty, so here I am :3Concept wise, plot wise, content wise, this whole thing is 10/10. I love the use of alternating font sizes, and also the mega dramatic accompanying images - they work together to create the vibe that the story is taking itself very seriously, but in a satirical way, if that makes any sense at all. I have actually never read the original version of this? Whoops - so I can't really comment on how good a parody it is in that regard. But taking it on its own, it stands up by itself quite well which I think is an important marker for any good parody/spin-off. I really really love the photos you've chosen, especially of the lego person and the little girl with all the hands pointing at her. Like she's 100% about to be peer pressured into buying something by all those disembodied arms. Nitpick wise, I just had a couple of small notes~
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I love the use of alternating font sizes, and also the mega dramatic accompanying images
On a related note, reviewing this made me hanker for some good ole angsty Shady poetry to review ~ I might have to bully you into writing another angsty poem for me :3
Hey there ShadowVyper, R33SE here for a review!!
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wow... too true.
Amazingly done. I Love the way you made it graphic and screaming. The font is so big, I got scared even haha. Great job!
i cri so beautiful
the variation in the text size for emphasis is the best part of this 10/10
Wow. What a masterpiece.
This is amazing. I love it... golden
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